Hello I will be writing about a response essay about Adora Stvitak which taught us about how children can teach adults.
Children can do this because adults try to do something very serious and try to think of something and try to so
do something right. But kids have the imagination and they don't think about anything people would like
To think of their self. But I think this is a very good statement because that is true. Children should have
freedom and we can teach adults. I think adults should let us go and try
to learn from us.
First of all, your response is too short and disorganized. If you follow the format explained in class and on my blog, you would be able to present your ideas more clearly.
ReplyDeleteSome of your sentences are too long and don't make much sense. I don't think you really thought about what to write.
Please do the thinking work on paper before you sit at the keyboard and type. The goal is to write your response thoughtfully and well, not just quickly.